四六級(jí)考試越來越使模板無用武之地，閱卷教師在閱卷的過程中最多的是關(guān)注同窗們的用詞和句型的運(yùn)用。

高分作文標(biāo)志

1、四級(jí)120-150字；六級(jí)150-180字；

2、能否長(zhǎng)短句穿插；

3、用詞能否恰當(dāng)，精確，形象，盡量運(yùn)用可以吸收閱卷教師眼球的閃光詞；

4、關(guān)鍵詞能否換用，切勿老用反復(fù)詞；

下面給出寫好一篇作文的留意事項(xiàng)：

1、恰當(dāng)用被動(dòng)替代主動(dòng)，這樣能更客觀的反映事實(shí), 句子開頭不要總是用we / I (比方寫結(jié)尾時(shí)不用 we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. )舉個(gè)經(jīng)典結(jié)尾2004年六月六級(jí)作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. Thus， its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.

2、擅長(zhǎng)運(yùn)用插入語，比方說把副詞、銜接詞等，作插入語放在中間，普通放在主語、動(dòng)詞或者助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。

如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語放在中間，普通放在動(dòng)詞，助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。

比方說： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …

3、一定要學(xué)會(huì)換詞，換形象，詳細(xì)的替代太廣泛的。(考試中普通不要呈現(xiàn)good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等)比方上面例子中，applicable替代proper, approaches替代ways, implement替代 carry out, sharpen one’’s competitive edge替代 enhance one’’s competitiveness(進(jìn)步某物競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力)

下面舉一篇優(yōu)秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何運(yùn)用各類寫作技巧的。

Computer and I By Simmy

I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.

exceedingly 交換 very

thrilling 交換 exciting

sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 交換 sb. be interested in sth.

google 交換 search

an army of 交換 a lot of

The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!

The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個(gè)精彩句型，用來描繪在某個(gè)時(shí)期發(fā)作了什么事情；

Increasing popularity 交換 more and more popular

Coincident with … 十分地道的詞匯，表達(dá)\"與…分歧\"的意義，交換 With …

Advancement 交換 development

Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )交換 enter into

Current ( currently )交換 now

Appeal to sb. 交換 sb. be interested in sth.

Growing individuals 交換 more and more people

It is no exaggeration to say 經(jīng)典句型，說某事是毫不夸大的

For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.

For a start 交換 To begin with

We can, freely, search 用了插入語的寫作手法

our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了十分精彩的被動(dòng)